Tuesday, 13 September 2016


                                                          Narrative Writing

                                           Purpose : To Entertain our audience

                                                       Structure : Introduction

WALT: Co-construct a narrative with my partner
WILF:  Followed narrative structure

Once upon a time there was two fighters named ConorMcgregor and Nate Diaz they where best friends. Conor Mcgregor and Nate Diaz where top dog UFC fighters. They had boldging biceps and smooth gigantic legs. Conor Mcgregor is the ufc middle weight champion. Nate Diaz is as muscly as Conorn Mcgregor.

Nate Diaz and Conor Mcgregor flew from Ireland to Samoa but the problem was they smuggled drugs. The security caught them with drugs at the airport because the drugs got detected.

After getting caught they got put behind bars. Luckily Mark Hunt was there to bail them out.

All three of them caught a private plane to the USA to get ready for their 3 on 3 UFC champion belt fight. They were fit to go then they all got KO'ed blood was dripping from their noses like a slow leaking tap they tried to stand but their legs wobbled like a flappy sharks tail. The crowd booed them and threw rubbish in the ring. All three were so embarrassed they never fought again.

Wednesday, 17 August 2016


Pattern Poems

WALT: Use interesting adjective in poetry writing 

Fast horse
Fat horse
Slow, growing horse
Lonely horse
Hairy horse
Handsome, looking horse.

Tuesday, 3 May 2016


For reading we are learning about the importance of MAKING CONNECTIONS!
Making Connections helps us to link what we already know about the topic to the text...e experiences: black sweet ocean coast paua and cream seafood in the water
Topic: Paua
😄 Text-to-Self connections… Connections to your own life experiences: black sweet ocean coast paua and cream seafood in the water NZ delicious chewy slimy yummy strong shell rocks diving colourful shell

Books, Library, EducationText-to- text connections to other books or movies: black gold kaitime life (living channel) Abalone
wars (70 sky) love nature (sky) marae kai masters my kitchen rules cams kai
Free stock photo: World, Text-to--world… Connections to what you know about the world or   your community.
NZ- called paua Rest of the world- abalone coastlines eat in all countries limit-Quota-protect paua for the future Illegal to dive with bottles. Better bigger and more in colder rougher waters.  

Thursday, 14 April 2016

WALT : Retell a past event.
WILF: correct sequence of events.

No school work today we're cooking Miss Wihongi
shouted. Solid bo I thought to myself. Rm 3 gets  to
cook. I love custard. “Mason” Miss Wihongi called.  I

hurried to the back of the class and shoved on the light blue gloves. I snatched a sharp potato peeler from the stack. I held my juicy apple in my other hand. I started to peel. Yes all the skin is off the apple. I slice it in half then into quarters. I cut the core out then I sliced it thin. I throw my load of apple into the huge round pot. The apple is ready to stew. Off to the staffroom we sprint I mixed sugar and butter together then flour. It looked like stuffing. I evenly sprinkled this on top of the stewed apples. I slid it into the oven. It smelt like heaven I glared into the oven. The bubble reminded me of Ngawha. “Its ready whanau. Haere mai ki te kai”. Miss Wihongi shouted. I hurried to snatch a colourful bowl and waited for everyone else. I slowly scooped a huge mouthful. Yummy I thought. What a beautiful day. :)